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Grog it is! I would have maybe suggested you cut back on all those hyphenates, but I liked that review very much.
Posted by gloomy gus on December 20, 2011 at 2:14 PM · Report this
Supreme Ruler Of The Universe 2
That email was not well written.
Posted by Supreme Ruler Of The Universe http://www.you-read-it-here-first.com on December 20, 2011 at 2:23 PM · Report this
bedipped 3
Blame your editor.
Posted by bedipped on December 20, 2011 at 2:23 PM · Report this
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"Tamara Murphy's pork will knock your socks off."
Posted by First line of that childish review on December 20, 2011 at 2:27 PM · Report this
Fnarf 5
Rewrite the review, but with only one change: inserting the words "Hot Diggity!" at the very beginning.
Posted by Fnarf http://www.facebook.com/fnarf on December 20, 2011 at 2:28 PM · Report this
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@1/2/3: Thanks!
@5: Now THAT is funny. Very tempted to change the online version.
Posted by Bethany Jean Clement on December 20, 2011 at 3:20 PM · Report this
jjm84 7
The first sentence is a cliché and the paragraph is train of thought.
There's always another way to put it.
Cliché
We know what a pickled onions are, so we know what they contrast.
I like pork heaven.
Next two paragraphs are good (could have used fewer ()).

I don't care anymore, probably like your editor.
Posted by jjm84 on December 20, 2011 at 4:34 PM · Report this

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