The Lightning Field: The Field, The Lightning, Part I

Comments

1
Um, where is the middle and end of this story?
2
Cool... looking forward to pt 2.
3
I envy you this trip Jen, definitely high on my list of places I must visit.
4
Part 2 had better start with, "It was a dark and stormy night."
5
I have also been, and it's an amazing place (even without lightning). It's well-worth the money and effort. It's magical.
6
I didn't read the byline at first and assumed it was Charles writing. Worked surprisingly well to read it in Charles' voice in my head.

Also, I really want to read the next segment.
7
Yeah jeeze hurry up with the next installment already!
8
AWESOME. more, more!