Fiction

Stanza

Comments

1
hmm, honestly, I wanted you to rip my heart open with the end of this one.
2
Well I felt the opposite and was very relieved that poetry 'saved' her. It's enough to imagine what could have happened ... shudder!
3
Taking the reader on a roller-coaster ride but with actual fear of pain in 148 words.
4
Wonderful last line.
5
Thank you for not taking the easy way out. Wonderful.