An email from one “Cookin Better,” in its entirety:
The Terra Plata Review wasn’t really written that well.
Not quite sure what to do with this one. Help me out, Slog!
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An email from one “Cookin Better,” in its entirety:
The Terra Plata Review wasn’t really written that well.
Not quite sure what to do with this one. Help me out, Slog!
Comments are closed.
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Grog it is! I would have maybe suggested you cut back on all those hyphenates, but I liked that review very much.
That email was not well written.
Blame your editor.
“Tamara Murphy’s pork will knock your socks off.”
Rewrite the review, but with only one change: inserting the words “Hot Diggity!” at the very beginning.
@1/2/3: Thanks!
@5: Now THAT is funny. Very tempted to change the online version.
The first sentence is a cliché and the paragraph is train of thought.
There’s always another way to put it.
Cliché
We know what a pickled onions are, so we know what they contrast.
I like pork heaven.
Next two paragraphs are good (could have used fewer ()).
I don’t care anymore, probably like your editor.